Grammar Gremmar Grammer?

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Tell me what is wrong with these sentences, I dare you. It is directly copy-pasted from Google softwares for Mac. I am failing my English class or well, at least I am not getting an “A+” because of my somewhat distracting grammar. My professor told me to get help from the writing center. Furthermore, she told me to write using simple sentences, have somebody else proof-read my paper, and be in a group of native English-speaking students. I would have argued with her but I couldn’t speak straight English anyway. Believe me. I can read in straight English but not speak it without stuttering.

Anyway, after reading through my rant… I want to reward your patience!

I am giving out a free domain* with one year registration.

This is a contest that will run from now until May 1st.

You can use any or all of the following options to join. Each method gives you one entry.

1. Blog about this contest. It doesn’t have to be an entry solely dedicated to this contest. You can even just mention it in one of your random updates.

This must appear in your blog entry. Don’t forget to leave a comment here telling me about your entry…

2. Fave this blog in Technorati.

3. Comment on this entry with what is wrong with the sentence above (1 entry). Why is the sentence wrong? (another entry) and how can you fix it? (and another entry) The sentence that I am referring to is the one on the block quote, the sentence from Google’s description.. okay? Sorry for not making that clear enough!

Note: *Domain extension is limited to .com, .net, .org, .info, and .us !